Diolaugue wrighting

"Im better than you at dancing," said Micheal Jaskson.
"OOOOHHHH NO your not," screamed Elvis Presley
"Lets take it to the bath room," yelled Micheal Jackson.
"FINE," said Elvis.
"Wait don't you mean the dance floor," said Elvis
"Yeah what ever," said Micheal
"Where is the dance floor?" said Elvis
Michael replied "under your blue suede shoes,"
They both start dancing Micheal slips
"I WIN I WIN," skites Elvis
"It was a thriller of a competion," said Micheal.

Inter school athletics

I am so nervis the inter school is comming up I'm in the team

because I won the try outs for shot put and I won it so thats
how Im in the team. I can't wait untill the inter school because
I want to get it over and done with. I hope I win but I heard that
someone from another school can through it 11 meters THATS
FAR AS. I think that was a lie to freak me out from the inter schools

Dialogue wrighting

"Im better than you at dancing," said Micheal Jaskson.
"OOOOHHHH NO your not," screamed Elvis Presley
"lets take it to the bath room," yelled Micheal Jackson.
"FINE," said Elvis.
"Wait don't you mean the dance floor," said Elvis
"yeah what ever," said Micheal
"where is the dance floor," said Elvis
Michael replied "under your blue suede shoes,"
they both start dancing Micheal slips
"I WIN I WIN," skites Elvis
"It was a thriller of a competion," said Micheal.

writing

we were at the magnificent regent it was huge.I was nerves i had butter fly's in my stomach and i had the goose bumps. it was our turn we went on for our freaky Halloween dance i
was at the back.I was looking at the ordinance it was huge 800 people were looking at us we start
to do our awesome dance dace.

14/9/10 W.A.L.T: make tired writing come to life.

I was running along i felt a pain in my side. BOARING

I was gassing along i felt a terrific terrible tochering irritation in my side

free writting

16/8/10

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one day superman hit a builing and he went splat the end

My sock puppet desciption

My puppet's name is Bobby. He likes computers and playing games and he likes playing soccer.

he is a black sock with purple hair with white eyes and a grey shirt.

My Dad

­­­­­­­­­­My Dad he likes hunting ducks, pheasants and deer he also likes building sheds. He has really short black hair he always wheres shorts and a T-shirt and a beni with a duck on it. He is always traviling for work or on hunting trips. He is really funny he always smells like his links. He would never stop working until 5pm witch is so annoying. He works for a pipe company and sells pipe to people and shows them how to use it and weld it together.

Autumn

17/05/10

W.A.L.T: Describe -with voice

I walk into the forest and I feel the soft and crunchy leafs on my feet I pick one up I feel a soft leaf it was as smooth as a slippery eel fresh from the sea. They sound like they are snapping in my ear. I pick one up and I bite it tastes like wood (wood does not taste very nice). They look brown red yellow some are still green and have fallen of the tree.

By Hadley Reid

Afghanistan man

13/05/10

W.A.L.T:describe with - voice

His for head looks like the dirt when it is really dry because of the wrinkle. His eyes look sad and lonely. He wears a turban that looks like its made of cheap fabric and looks like a genie hat. He wears a animal skin on his head and it looks like he went out and shot it himself. He must live in a cold place because he has very thick clothing on.it looks like he had a awful life and has no home or family or friends.

Mrs Walker

12/05/10

Mrs Walker is energetic has lots of energy in her.

She is like a bouncy blue basket ball.

She is fit, Is very fast & has big muscles like a gorilla.

Mrs Walker has nails like claws & it looks like she

hasn't cut them for years or even century's.

The stich returns

I was running along. I felt a pain in my side.It was a stitch. I could not breath properly. I was slowing down. people where passing me. I was tired I was on my 3rd lap. I was pushing myself my leg were getting worse and worse. I was running as fast as I can. I'm on my 4th lap. I was passing people.Now my legs are getting so bad Mr McNaught blew the whistle it was over I was so happy.

The big fish

When I went to the beach we went fishing on a boat we went over the shark net so we would catch some really big fish we sat there waiting I herd a thump our boat shaked “I got a bite” I was pulling really hard it snapped the line and it took my bait it was a barracuda I was so angry I put a new line on and flung it into the water we waited 30min “I got another bite yay yippy” I was pulling really hard and even harder than last time I just about got pulled into the water I pulled and pulled I fell into the water I climbed in the boat as fast as lightning I was soaked I saw my rod skimming across the water as fast as you can blink it was gone it was coming back that was weird and it let go of the rod i picked it up i flung it into the water "I got a bite I got something massive i was something from the ocean depths I was a huge thing the size of a wale but it is way uglier it looked like a prehistoric sea monster from about sixty five million years ago two weeks later i was in the news paper the title was called 'Hadley and the big fish'

By Hadley

The haunted school

Once apon a time there was a haunted school called Riverdale School all of the teachers are zombies and talk in zombie language the zombie teacher said something to a student it sounded really weird and he had no idea what they said every one was gone he went inside it looked the same as his school only haunted.He was wondering he has never seen a Zombie in town so where do they go after. He kept looking there was a teacher he hid the teacher was Zombie TC he thought that there was a spy and was looking around his school and was trying to make the zombie school the same as his school.When he went to school the next day it was a zombie school so he thought that all of the schools in Palmerston north were Zombie fide then he thought that someone made a weird chemical and spilt it on the ground in room 13 every one was Zombie fide but him he thought that was really weird