Sunday, July 25, 2010

My sock puppet desciption

My puppet's name is Bobby. He likes computers and playing games and he likes playing soccer.
he is a black sock with purple hair with white eyes and a grey shirt.

1 comment:

  1. You have given a good physical description of Bobby but I think there is a lot more to Bobby's character than what you have written here. What about his personality? Some alliteration and some more interesting words would have made your character description a lot more richer. Keep that in mind for next time. Keep trying Hadley.